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For this and the last blog, students must write a draft of their oral project. The idea is to be able to correct grammar and vocabulary before the presentation of your final project:
As well as each person in the group has something specific to say in the project, the idea is that each one lets me know in advance, the script of his or her part of the presentation. For this week, you all must post on this blog the first draft of your presentation and I will give you corrections (May 18th to May 25th)
For the next week, (May 26th to May 2 to June 2nd) you have to post a new draft with my corrections included.
Example:
Project: Vegetarian recipe in English
Key Vocabulary: Raddish, Lettuce, Onion, Celery, Pound, Olive Oil, Mustard... (ingredients); Quarter, Pound, Tablespoon, Can, Spice, Teaspoon, Pot... (meassures); Cook, boil, stirr, mix, bake, freeze, chop, cut, add, pour... (actions)
Script:
You must chop the vegetables in squares, then, add olive oil and stirr, cut lettuce or cabage and add to the bowl, add a spice of salt and pepper and decorate with cream... (procedure)
Parliament
ResponderEliminaranorexia nervosa
Origin neurotic disorder characterized by a systematic rejection of food which is usually observed in young people;
The incidence of anorexia nervosa has increased over the past 20 years. It is estimated that occurs in one of every 100 women between the ages of 16 and 18 years old. Five to 10 percent of adolescents who are diagnosed with anorexia are male. Initially he found mostly in families of middle and upper class, but now anorexia is found in all socioeconomic groups and a variety of ethnic and racial groups.
Keywords
Disease
Food
Disorder
Rejection
Population
Children
teenagers
families
Feelings
Race
Nationality
Social class
Statistics
Disorder
90% of people affected by anorexia are women, but the number of men is growing, according to the psychiatrist Enric Armengou, who spent seven years specializing in the care of diseases such as bulimia and anorexia
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Anorexia is a disorder of eating behavior means a loss of weight caused by the patient himself and leads to a state of starvation.
Usually it begins with the elimination of carbohydrates, as there is the false belief that fat. Then rejects the fats, proteins and even fluids, leading to cases of extreme dehydration
Parliament?
EliminarOk. The information is ok. But my question is: is this actually what you are going to say? Is this exactly your speech?
The idea is not only to memorize but to have clear your information, because I can ask very specific questions about your topic once you finish your presentation.
Grade: 43
Project: Anorexia
ResponderEliminarkey vocabulary:
-food:solid substance that is eaten and serves as food.
-diaorder:Alteration in the functioning of a body or a part of it or the psychic or mental balance of a person.
-disease: mild or severe impairment of the normal functioning of an organism or any of its due to an internal or external cause parts.
-rejection: It is having a body resistance to the force exerted by another, forcing him back on course or movement.
-population: Set of inhabitants of a place
-childrens: Person who has few years of life, which is in childhood.
-nationality:Condition that recognizes a person belonging to a state or nation, which involves a series of political and social rights and duties.
-teenagers:is the period of life after childhood and before adulthood
-families:Group of people formed by a couple who live together and have a life in common, and their children, when they have
-feelings:It is a mood that occurs for reasons that are impressive, and they can be happy and joyful, or painful and sad
script:
In some cases, people with anorexia simply start trying to lose some weight or get fit. But the need to eat less, purge or exercise excessively becomes "addictive" and is very difficult to control.
There are some signs that may indicate that a person has anorexia. Anorexics can:
lot thinner, become brittle or squalid
obsession with food, food and weight control
repeatedly weigh
count or rationed food thoroughly
fill with water when they visit a professional to weigh yourself
eat only certain foods and avoiding dairy, meat, wheat ... (although many people are allergic to certain foods or are vegetarian)
excessive exercise
feeling fat / a
socially isolated, especially to avoid meals or celebrations where food is served
depressed, feeling energized and often feel cold.
presented by:Camila Chaparro
diaorder?
Eliminarand it's very difficult to control
I hope that, if this is exactly the information you are going to present. You have it clear, because I will ask questions at the end of your presentation.
Grade: 4,3
Hi!!
ResponderEliminarProject: Challenges ♥
Key Vocabulary
*Challenges: Retos
*Fun: Muy divertidos
*Follows: Siguientes
*Sing: Cantar
*Song: Canción
*Guess: Adivinar
*No You Laugh: No Te Rías
*Funny: Gracioso
*Loses: Pierde
*Bellow: A Continuación
*Colleagues: Compañeros
*Also: Tambien
*I Hope You Like: Espero Les Guste
My dialogue
Hi guys
My name is Tatiana
And we will come to present a video on challenges really fun that we do.
I proposed two challenges which are as follows:
1.Ummhhmm
This first challenge is to sing a song but ummm you have to sing it and the other has to guess what.
2.No you laugh
The second challenge is fun this is that you see funny videos and the first to be laugh lost.
Below my colleagues will present their challenges too
Thank you very much for your attention I hope you like.
No you laugh? The correct way is "DON'T LAUGH" (you need to study imperatives again and again)
EliminarThe first to laugh misses
So so.
Not all the word of the list are KEY words
Grade: 4,0
The History Of Video Games
ResponderEliminarThe history of video games has its origins in the 1940s when, after the end of World War II, the victorious powers built the first programmable supercomputers like ENIAC, 1946. The first attempts to implement programs playful character (initially chess programs) soon they appeared, and were repeated during the following decades. The first modern games appeared in the 60s, and since then the world of video games has not ceased to grow and develop with the only limit imposed on it by the creativity of the developers and the evolution of technology. In recent years, we are witnessing an era of technological progress dominated by an industry that promotes a model of rapid consumption where new blockbusters become obsolete in a few months, but where at the same time a group of people and institutions -aware the role the pioneering programs, companies that defined the market and the great visionaries had on the development of this industry, have initiated the formal study of the history of video games.
Keywords
Maps.
Programmers.
Enemies.
Objectives.
Commands.
Codes.
Consoles.
Games.
Programs.
Graphics.
History.
The most immediate reflection of the popularity that has reached the world of videogames in contemporary societies constitutes an industry that employs 120,000 people and generates billionaire’s benefits increase year after year. The impact resulted in the appearance of the gaming world meant a revolution whose social, psychological and cultural implications are the subject of study of a whole new generation of social scientists who are tackling the new phenomenon from an interdisciplinary perspective, using methodologies research as diverse as the specific cultural anthropology, artificial intelligence, communication theory, economics or aesthetics, among others. As happened with film and television, the game has achieved in just half a century the status of artistic medium, and such an achievement has not taken place without a transformation and constant evolution of the concept of game and acceptance. Born as an experiment in academia, he managed to establish itself as a product of mass consumption in just ten years, exerting a tremendous impact on new generations who saw the game with a new audiovisual medium that would allow them to star forward their own stories.
I don't think you are going to say exactly this by memory. The idea of this draft was that you summarized the information, (make it shorter) as if this were your final presentation. You have to narrow this data because I may ask questions in specific about the topic.
EliminarGrade 4,2
hello... our proyect is based on challenges.
ResponderEliminarMy challenges is the shobbie bonnie,consists in introduce all you can to marshmallow mouth whitout passing or chew
MATERIALS:
1. only marshmallow
PROCESS
1.We start introducing marshmallow in our mouth without chewing, when you outgrow us nothing in the mouth.
2.We started pulling the marshmallow from the mouth and counting
3.At the end of the game which more marshmallow has been introduced in the mouth is the winner
KEYWORDS:
chew: masticarlos
passing: pasarlos
consists in introducING
EliminarAt the end of the game WHO has introduced more marshmallows in his / her mouth wins
So so:
Grade: 4.0
project: Ricipe
ResponderEliminarKey vocabulary:
ingredients:milk,sugar,cornstarch, mix
meassures:three quarters,one hundred and fifty grams,one teaspoon and half
actions: make, eat, freezing, put, prepar, cook
objects: stove, fridge, pot,cup,plate
script my part:
Custard with cornstarch can surprise your guests at an event and make it a memorable meal, a fabulous birthday party or the smaller snack make the house disappear.
Custards are widespread in Spanish cuisine dairy dessert. It is a cream made with milk, egg yolks, sugar and flavorings such as vanilla or lemon but in this case we have the cornflour
Ingredients
¾ milk
150 g. of sugar
1 ½ teaspoons cornstarch
Preparation time: 30 minutes
END...
RECIPE
EliminarI didn't see most of your key words in the script
Grade: 4.3
PROJECT: HEALTHY EATING PLAN by Shirley Vanessa Muñoz L.
ResponderEliminarKey Vocabulary:
Healthy, Eating, Plan, Intake, Meat, Butter, Legumes, Whole grains, Plant oils, Vegetables, Poultry, Nuts, Seeds, Oils, Fruits, Exercise, Weight, Meals, Maintain, Mind, Body, Physical, Hunger,
Physically, Active, Snacks, Low, Fat, Sugar, Such, Wholegrain, Bread, Cereals, Dairy, Products, Consume, Least, Portion
Scripts:
Healthy Eating Plan
The healthy eating plan is a guide to how you can plan your meals to help you maintain a healthy mind and body.
Who is the plan for?
The plan is designed for healthy adult men and women.
How much should I eat?
Use your physical hunger as a guide. If you are physically active you will probably need to eat more than someone who is not very physically active.
Do I need to eat snacks?
Snacks can be an important part of a healthy eating plan.
Hunger is your best guide about how many snacks you need.
Choose snacks low in fat and sugar such as vegetables, fruit, wholegrain bread and cereals and low fat dairy products.
How often do I need to eat fruits and vegetables?
Each day, you should consume at least 2 portion of fruit and 5 portion of vegetables.
What should I drink?
It’s important to drink much liquid all day. Everyday you should consume at least 5-7 glasses of water.
Good
EliminarGrade 4,5
project:English custard recip
ResponderEliminarkey vocabulary
.mix
.ready to prepare
.pot
.milk
.cups
.plate
.put
.stove
.buy
.ground cinnamon
.clove
.rainsins
.if you want
.you have to
.preparation
.cook
.wait
.two
.frezze
.fridge
my part
.you have to buy a mix ready to prepare of natilla
you have to buy a milk bag
.you have to put two cups of milk
.you have to put with the mix ready to prepare and the two cups of milk
.you have to mix the preparation
.you have to put the pot in the stove
.you have to wait than cook your natilla
.you have to if you want put ground cinnamon clove and rainsins
.you have to put in yor plate
.you have to frezze in the fridge
.you have to eat the natilla
end..
Good
EliminarGrade: 4,5
MI DIALOGUE
ResponderEliminarI live in Bogota
I like ice cream, sweets, accessories
my holidays are fun, extreme.
my experiences are very humorous anecdotes, anecdotes nohe had sad or bad
My first taste was the Patacon
My first trip was by plane to Santa Marta
my feelings are cheerful, a little annoying, I laugh all, I am extroverted
my first friends were Juan Felipe and sara
My first favorite singer was hanna montana
my experiences what? that sentence is NOT CLEAR al all
EliminarI need more details in the explanation of each experiente. is not only to mention, is to describe.
Grade: 4,0
project: the wwe
ResponderEliminarvocabulary
moves, opponent, keys, attacking, remains, makes, fighters, wins, position, time, disqualified, situation, program, part, object
disqualified
Use keys or illegal moves, hit several times with a closed fist.
Hit the opponent with an external object
A direct blow to the groin.
Hit the referee intentionally
Attacking the opponent Eye
countout
remains outside the ring until after the referee makes it to the count of 10. If both fighters remain outside the ring when the count reaches 10, both are disqualified
Countout rule also indicates that a fighter can not win if any part of the opponent fighter is outside the ring
pinfall
To win by pinfall, a wrestler must place his opponent's shoulders to the mat and keep it in that position while the referee hits the canvas three times.
There are times when the shoulders of both fighters were on the canvas when making the count of 3. This situation most often leads to declare a draw, and in some cases a struggle in the future program to determine the winner.
by: juan felipe jimenez pacheco
This doesn't seem to be a summary made by you, it looks like a copy-paste from the web instead. This information is suposed to be clear for you, because I can ask a question in any moment about the topic.
EliminarGrade: 4,0
Batmaning challenge
ResponderEliminarIt consists of hang head, but that is only the feets of the rarest and stupid things.
I will try it
Planking
It is imitate a table with arms close to the body lying face down in the rare and stupids sites
I will try it
cinnamon challenge
This challenge is to eat a whole spoonful of cinnamon powder which causes things like choking when ingested, watery eyes etc…
I will try it
'feet' doesn't have plural (it's already plural - irregular)
ResponderEliminarDespite it sounds interesting, you should include why you decided to do this. What's the good or the bad of doing this.
It doesn't look so much prepared.
Grade: 37
Chocolate muffins recipe
ResponderEliminartablespoon
teaspoon
Preheat
comine
melted
liquid
ingredients
powder
chocolate
chips
prepared
spoon
remaining
bake
finally
remove
oven
Combine the flour, cocoa powder, baking powder, sugar and salt in a large bowl
The dry and wet ingredients, respectively, can be mixed in advance, but as soon as the wet and dry ingredients have been combined with each other, the liquid will activate the baking powder and the batter needs to be baked right away.
enjoys muffins